1^st overall grade: REFER (1) 15/48 M15    18/09/2023

1^st overall feedback: Thank you for your 1st submission Haifa. You have made a good effort here, but much of your assignment does not demonstrate full understanding of the topic. Your answers do not always meet the full requirements of the AC, and command verbs such as evaluate/assess have not always been followed. 

There is a case study in this assignment – GA Pensions. You are expected to refer to it within your answers so please ensure that you do so in your revisions. 

The referred ACs:
Task 1- 1.1, 1.3, 1.4, 2.1, 2.2 and 2.3

Task 2 – 2.4, 3.1 and 3.3

 Please follow the individual feedback for these ACs as well as the summary feedback below. You must strike-through (do not delete) any unwanted content and add new text in red font

Reading the ACs

Some of your answers have been referred because they do not cover everything asked for in the AC. Please read the ACs very carefully to ensure that you have answered everything.  Often a task will have more than one element you need to address- please read the task carefully to make sure you have covered all of the requirements.

Command verbs.

These are usually at the start of an AC and are commands such as ‘evaluate’, ‘assess’, ‘compare’ and ‘explain’. You are expected to pay attention to these in your answers – please refer to Oakwood’s guidance on command verbs.

Case study

If your assignment has a case study, then you are expected to draw on this within all your answers.

Wordcount

Still expected to be within the word count. Please check this before you submit. Strike-through your original word count and re-write it on page 2 in red.

Sources and References

Aim to refer to at least two references per answer.